The Descent of Men describes the changing roles and expectations for men and women in our society. Dan Kindlon attributes this to the blurring of gender lines. Women are attending college at a higher rate than men, making up a more significant percent of the job market, and are showing, on average, more drive for advancement. Men on the other hand are becoming more content with women being on level ground with them and are taking on bigger parts of child rearing. In the 21st century, society's notions of gender are more complex than ever before. As the lines between masculine and feminine continue to blur, we can expect to live in a more progressive nation where men and women are not afraid, but even encouraged, to cross the gender line.
Kindlon’s arguments solely utilize Logos. He rarely makes a claim that he cannot back up with data or studies. Because we have established that he is a credible writer, his use of statistical data is very effective. Statistical arguments cannot be refuted (unless you are arguing about the credibility of the data), but the author’s interpretation of the data can be. The paper would be stronger if more attention was placed on factors that are holding development and change back, such as misogynistic ideals and entrenched cultural sexism.
